Erotic Poetry Challenge


I had no idea where I was going with this and it might not even flow together. It was written on the spot in one take because I didn’t know what else to write today. So here’s another poem, I know it seems a bit amateur, but I hope you still enjoy it anyway.

Pitch black, the color of night
Not a single star, there’s absence of light
The fog rolls in, painting the air
A chill raising every neck hair

Cackles in their highest pitch
Shrieks of a mischievous witch
Halloween is coming, her return is near
She is the reason for your every fear

A devious woman, once roamed the earth
The land was barren, it was a complete dearth
Alone in darkness, exiled from life
Her revenge was causing the living, much strife

So every year on October 31st
She unleashes unbearable thirst
Trickery and temptations seen on Halloween
You might hear her, but she remains unseen

From Jack o’lanterns to horror on TV
The fright is real, and the reason is she
Naughty nurses, slutty bunnies to scary things
These are just somethings her mischief brings

Her eyes are set on the man in the north
What lustful temptations will she bring forth?
Her tricks and temptations, both are a treat
For straddling his lap is her favorite seat

Great wizard of the north, answer the door
For just one night this witch will be your whore
Bobbing her head, unleashing the snake
Your shivers and screams shall not be fake

A lollipop earned for her tricks in bed
This is no fairy tale you’ve ever read
The wicked witch is just really naughty
Treating the great wizard, with her naked body

sass c

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Erotic Poetry Challenge

sass c.

i'm just your average girl with a dirty mind. young, asian and submissive...does that pique your interest? constantly in a battle with myself whether to stay confined by my cultural values or to break free like the freak i am.

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  1. This poem is only amateur if you think it is. I think it is pretty good, there are some clever lines in here. And just for the record, I would love a naughty nurse or a slutty bunny about now, what are you going to be for Halloween, Sass?

    1. Thanks El! Oh, I was thinking I could always be a stripper for Halloween. What costume would incite a reaction on your part?

      1. Anything, as I watch it come off.

  2. It’s really difficult to flow from start to finish and keep the Theme on track.
    It’s not amateurish at all.
    I’ve read hundreds of blogs by long established folk with questionable construction, grammar, spelling etc

    You did very well 💗

    1. Thank you. I sort just wrote the first thing that popped into my head and sometimes, I’m scatterbrained so it starts one way and ends in a completely different universe haha.

  3. Elliott is right. And I agree, your sense of rhythm a nd rhyme is spot on, and there are some great lines and images.

    1. Thank you Brigit! That means a lot. I’ve been feeling rather uninspired to write lately so hearing that my last minute ramble of a poem was good brings a smile to my face.

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